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Lil the genie

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This is Lil my OC who was turned into a genie after rubbing a cursed lamp she found in a temple while on a dig for school.  She's involved in one rp already.  I hope you like her.  :slipperyhug: :love: Neko Emoji-37 (Yay) [V2] 


Lamp:
DSC09711 Aladdin's Lamp 10 by wintersmagicstock
Background:
 Marble Halls premade background by little-spacey
Image size
1212x2368px 2.46 MB
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:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

I see much potential in this character! And her story/background. I think you should continue on your journey with this character and maybe make a manga series out of it! I really like the style you used in this drawing as well. I won't be too harsh about this but I believe the outlines are a little shaky, but. I am worse at outlining than anybody in the world so there's that. You're coloring is very beautiful along with the shading and highlights. Very good job! I believe the background fits the idea of your character but the lamp should be placed elsewhere. It looks pretty out of place to me, and I believe it might be better to try other areas. Think how a genie is magic. Maybe have the lamp floating, with the magic mist encasing it, making it look like it's holding the lamp in the air. The overall style of the drawing is beautiful and has much potential :3